Writing Quality Comments Session #2

 This week in our Cybersmart lesson we continued with our work on writing quality comments and publishing them on other people's blogs. We worked on being positive, thoughtful and helpful. We also talked about how asking a question at the end might get people to reply to our comment. 

This week we commented on Room 6 @ Wainui School's blog post on Beebot Disco. You can view the blog post and read our comments here.

You can read all our comments on the Google Doc we all worked on here.

Here are some of our comments. Do you think these are quality comments?

Kia ora Room 6
My name is Bonny and I am in Rimu Hub at Ormond School in Gisborne.
I like the beebots you made and I like the choice of music that the beebots danced to.
The beebots on the left were dancing to the same beat which was really interesting to watch.
Maybe next time you could use different music and different dress ups. 

How hard was it to control them?
From Bonny

Kia ora Room 6
My name is Charlie and I am in Rimu Hub at Ormond School in Gisborne.
I liked the way you made the bee bots stay in time with each other.
We had that song at our school disco.
Maybe if you give the bee bots some more room so they don't crash into each other.
How did you make them move at the same time?
From Charlie