Writing Quality Comments on Blogs

In our Cybersmart lessons we have been learning how to write positive, thoughtful, helpful comments to publish on other people's blogs. 

We drafted our comments on a Google Doc. You can read all our comments on our class CYbersmart page here.

This week we wrote comments on Room 3 @ Matawai School about Te Reo Māori Greetings, You can read the blog post and our comments here. 

Here are some quality comments from our work today.. Can you see how they have been positive, thoughtful and helpful? 

Kia ora Room 3

My name is Charlie and I am in Rimu Hub at Ormond School in Gisborne.I really like the way you made the duck and the frog talk to each other.
This reminded me that I could talk a little bit of Maori.
Did you need help to make the video?
From Charlie

Kia ora Room 3
My name is Hunter and I am in Rimu Hub at Ormond School in Gisborne.
Hi Tim, I really liked how you made the frog ribbit.
I thought that your frog was really amazing with the wizard hat. It reminded me of when I found a frog in my woodshed when we were cutting firewood.
I think that your Scratch was really amazing because it had all the frogs ribbiting and the hat on top of the frog that was pretty spectacular.
I don't know how to use Scratch. Is it fun to use Scratch?
From Hunter